Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts

Friday, September 20, 2019

Week 5 Story



Archer of Death
There once was a great king that lived in the mountains. This king had four sons but only one was truly destined for greatness. Gregory was out in the garden tending to the plants and flowers just as his mother asked him to when a messenger was sent for him to report to his father’s throne room. When he arrived, he saw a man on his knees before his father with his head bowed. He approached his father and asked what he was there for. No sooner had he asked that his three other brothers arrived in the throne room. The king said loudly to his sons that they were to go on a very important mission. The king said that this man before him was plagued by demons and furies. He then told his sons that they were to go and defeat a great number of furies and demons. The sons looked at each other then at the king and bowed to the king before reporting to the armory. They were each given a bow to combat the enemy they would face. Once they said their goodbyes, they were off to fight the demons. After a couple days on the road they ran into one of the demons and Gregory grabbed his bow, aimed and fired at the enemy. The demon fell from the sky, dying before it hit the ground. The man they were assisting looked at Gregory and said he was truly amazing and nicknamed him the Archer of Death.
               The group continued into a new city that they had never been to in the Ganges called Ulkin. In this city the king was currently looking for a suitor that was to marry his daughter. Gregory while exploring the city entered the gardens they had. He had always loved a stroll the garden. He enjoyed the smell of life and the different colors of the plants. Never had he seen such beautiful bushes and flowers. While walking through the garden he ran across a woman that was dressed like royalty. He was in awe and instantly fell in love when their eyes connected. He new he needed to do whatever necessary to be with her. One of his brothers came up to him and whispered in his ears that this woman was Elveera and that she was the princess. Hearing this Gregory was so pleased that there was a chance of marriage for he had heard of the test for her hand in marriage. Gregory approached the throne room seeking to win her hand. The contest was simple, he needed to successfully pull on the bow string of the kings bow. He grabbed the bow and pulled with all his might snapping the bow in half. The king was furious that he had done this and told him that since he had no respect for his bow, he was not going to be able to wed the princess. Gregory went away ashamed and sad; never before had he thought of his strength as a curse.
               When he got back to his campsite a messenger road in and told him that the princess had been kidnapped. The king offered to forget his transgression if he would but save his daughter from the Demon King. Gregory swelled with happiness at a chance to win over his love. He agreed and set out to find his love with the help of many loyal friends he had met along the journey. One day one of the messengers came and told him where the princess was being held. Gregory in that instant grabbed all the belongings he would need and rode out to meet this great evil that had taken Elveera. Upon arrival he was greeted by a man who said he was the king’s brother and that he would side with Gregory. Gregory was glad to have more help and inquired about her exact location. He sent his brothers to rescue her while he defeated the king. The Demon King roared a loud roar and rushed Gregory yelling that Elveera was his and was to be his wife. Gregory stood his ground and didn’t flinch in the face of oncoming danger. He grabbed his bow and pulled back as far as he could and launched an arrow that soared true and struck its mark. The Demon King stopped and looked down finding the arrow buried deep into his chest he realized he had been bested. Gregory stopped standing over the king offering a few words of respect before running to find his future bride. Elveera wept with joy at being able to leave the Demons kingdom. She also felt great appreciation and expressed her feelings to Gregory telling him that she loved him from first sight. Gregory's heart swelled at this and upon their arrival home they were both married.

Authors Notes: I changed several things from the original firstly the names of the characters. Then I changed how instead of Gregory (Rama) getting to wed Elveera (Sita) because he pulled back on the string breaking the bow. I made it to where that disqualified him, and he needed to further prove himself. I also cut out Elveera’s (Sita’s) point of view at first sight allowing that to come up later in the story. 


 


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Thursday, September 19, 2019

Reading Notes: The Divine Archer Part B


The Divine Archer Notes Part B
This section of the notes will be regarding the Demon King himself so that I might write a story mixing the Demon King and Rama into a fight to the death. While approaching the Demon King Rama and Vibishan meet. Vibishan is the brother of Ravan the Demon King. He says that he cares not for what the demon king cares for and that his hear is with his people. He decided however to lend aid to Rama in his quest to return Sita to himself. The Demon King is trying to get Sita to agree to be his queen. Each of his advances however she is turning down. Hanuman one of the monkey people that Rama sent to find Sita finally sees her and rushes to tell her that Rama is coming. Rama shall arrive to save her in but a few days. The king found out and tried to have rags tied around the monkey’s tail and lit on fire. However, magic prevented this from happening because his tail kept growing wider and wider. The Demon King’s wife found out and tried to get her husband to turn away from Rama. She knew the danger he was in getting into blows with Rama. Vibishan implore Ravan to give Sita back to Rama as well. Of course the Ravan was furious and would listen to neither his wife nor his brother, his mind was set on battle. The battle commenced and The Divine Archer shot arrows from the bow of Indra and downed the king.  The queen mourned her dead husband and Rama paid his respects to the downed king.

 
 
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Tuesday, September 17, 2019

Reading Notes: The Divine Archer Part A


The Divine Archer Part A
Rama had been told by his father to go with the hermit to help him kill the Furies and Demons that had been bothering him. Rama and his brothers gathered all their belongings and went along with him. Each took with them a bow and arrows to defeat the mighty demons. On their journey they faced one of the demons. The Divine Archer, Rama pulled back on his bow and fired at the demon. The demon fell dead before the men. They continued their journey with a new destination the Ganges. They stumbled upon the palace of Janak who was looking for a suitor for his daughter. He wanted only the strongest among the men, so he issued a challenge. The man that could pull back the bow he had would be able to marry his daughter. While going for a walk Rama and his brother walked through a garden. While in this garden he stumbled upon Sita. He knew by her anklets that she was beautiful and someone he could truly fall in love with. Upon seeing her he was sure of it and was obsessed with her. All the heralds knew that Rama was the perfect suitor for her and that he should be the one to marry her. He however was apprehensive. Thankfully with a push from the hermit to go to the trial he stepped up to the bow. He pulled at the string with all his might until it could hold no longer. The bow snapped in half and let out a mighty roar that shook the earth. A large man jumped out from the shadows and was furious with Rama for what he had done. He told Rama if he be a true hero to pull on his bow of Vishnu. Rama did this and the celebration commenced!

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